I woke up in the morning and peaked outside my room I saw it. Ive been waiting for this it for a long time now he had finally come it was a beast the size of a horse and was very pale. It was time to kill it. I got dressed and got my trusty bow and spear and crept out of the house and into the fog, he stood there lurking in the shadows I tip toed up to him stabbed my spear into his back and he wasnt happy I got my bow and it was to late.
Goal: To make the story mysterious and make it engaging.